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Last Saturday

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Washing the morning dishes,

Just minding my own business,

(A bit grudging, I must add),

When down it rained, beauty-clad.


Strains of pleasing melody,

Triads in sweet harmony,

I cast eyes outward, wonder!

The music did not flounder.


Down it wafted from above,

Gently, gently, like a dove;

Master fingers undisclosed,

As they played the highs and lows.


I hurried with the washing,

No sign of tuneless humming.

Finally done, I grabbed the leash

As excuse of remedy.


With my dog, hasted to sidewalk

And slowed my pace to a walk.

Ears now alert, eyes akin,

For the music was now dim.


Now my gaze is on high grounds,

Still the rapturous effects sounds.

With a sudden jolt, I knew,

Keys I used to play so true.


Oh, joy! One of my Bach piece!

Now the skillful play has ceased

Fleeting time, I'm back at home

The piano's where I roam.

This all really happened, although the "my Bach piece" wasn't. Inspired by the incident, I decided to write it down. Even though the rhythm wasn't entirely satisfactory (at least for me), this is, so far, my best in-one-hour poem I've ever written. ^^


Critiques and comments welcomed!

♦ MaidenStar ♦
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Me2Smart4U's avatar
what a very deep and unique flow...I truly enjoyed reading each word...this is very well written